Sunday, 24 August 2014

Writing Snapshot

Today we watched a video clip about the Blue Whale and wrote a report about what we found out. The class have been learning about the planning process and this was a quick chance to take a snapshot about their progress.

They watched the video twice, creating a bubble map or cluster map, and then wrote a draft report using the criteria slips glued in their books.



Have a look at Harry's writing - you can see that he's able to make a detailed map and put the clusters into paragraphs. His next step is to get better at his intros and conclusions!


1 comment:

  1. Awesome concentration in that pic!! Great report Harry. I like how many ideas you have on your map.

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